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【托福写作】想拿高分?开头段写好很重要!
2022-07-06 09:59:10  作者:爱启多英语   阅读量:388

托福写作想要拿高分,其实开头段也是占非常重要的作用的。这里不仅仅是因为开头段第一眼就能看到,很多考官也是会根据开头段评分的。


那么,托福写作该如何将开头段写好呢?有哪些方式以及用词可以借鉴?小编就带大家一起来了解下~




副词开头


推荐词语有:


obviously / undoubtedly


apparently / fortunately


clearly / unfortunately


incredibly / luckily


unluckily / surprisingly/frighteningly


例句:


Unfortunately, he tripped over and fell in the mud. =It is unfortunate that he tripped over and fell in the mud.




插入语开头


推荐插入语有:


no wonder,no doubt


in other words,in my opinion


in conclusion,in fact


as a matter of fact


例句:


Strangely enough, Jennifer does not enjoy sunshine and beach.




介词短语开头


用介词短语开头,表示句子谓语动词发生的时间、地点、方式、原因、条件。


On seeing him approach, the girl immediately turned her face to a shop window


pretending to look at something there.( 时间)


Around the corner, a crowd gathered.( 地点)


Unlike his father, Peter touches neither cigarettes nor alcohol.( 方式)


Due to the limit of seats, he was not accepted.( 原因)


In case of fire, use the stairways.( 条件)




重述法开头


所谓重述法,即是对关于这个话题的当前现状的重述。审完一篇作文的题目要求,有时候脑子里一时之间可能想不出应该如何展开思路,这种时候大家就可以用重述法来进行开头段落的撰写。

接下来,就帮大家举两个例子来了解下如何用这个方法~


实例1:


Nowadays, people are facing more and more work-related stress. State the possible reasons for this phenomenon and make some recommendations about how to combat it.


思路分析:


本题的话题关于压力,那考生可从当前社会现象来考虑这个问题,考生不难想出当下对压力这一现象的情况,即很多人都在承受着或多或少的压力。可用it is generally believed that … 形式主语的句型。


开头段参考:


It is generally believed that white-collar as well as blue-collars workers are suffering from psychological and physical stress stemming from work.


实例2:


Environmental problem is too big for individual countries and individual people to address. In other words, we have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?


思路分析:


本题话题为环境问题,考生也可用重述法对当前环境问题进行重述,这时,可以用In modern society/ At present, 等表时间的介词短语来引导一个叙述句型。


开头段参考:


In modern society, environment related issues have confronted ecological scientists, government agencies and the general public.


以上内容就是对托福写作开头段的讲解,希望能给同学们更多写作借鉴,争取能在接下来的练习和考试中发挥的更好。


祝同学们早日都能和托福分手!

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